I made progress on my rewrite of “The Barrier”, my transportation planning movie. The script is matched to the movie now. I started to work on the revisions to the script. Conform Script to Current Movie I conformed the script to match the caption file I created for the movie when I first released it…. Read Article →
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One of the problems some viewers had with “The Barrier” was the amount of transportation planning jargon I used. I think I’ve come up with a way to deal with that. I also moved forward with my recreation of the script and creation of new subtitles. Jargon in “The Barrier” Some people commented that they… Read Article →
I worked on my novella, “Bright Freedom” this week. My goal was to develop the characters more. I came across some old notes from three years ago. My concept of the story has changed since then. For the most part , I developed some background for the characters this week. I had thought about the… Read Article →
I’ve left my story “Bright Freedom” unfinished for a long time. This week I took a stab at a rewrite. I find that the rewrite is harder to do than the first draft. My first attempt at this story was back in 2010 and early 2011. It was initially a movie script. I didn’t plan… Read Article →
